Poems and Futures
There are not only mess in front of us in this world,but also have poems and futures. Anytime when I felt tired or frustrated,I would think of this sentence.It gives me power and hope.But sometimes I really puzzled where happiness lies in ? Where is the future?What is the poem?
Now after more than forty years' experiences and search,I find happiness lies in our daily life.We must face the realities .We must handle the mess we meet bravely.If we fell tired,we can find poems to feed our soul.The poems I think is different for everyone.It may be a song,a flower,a smile or a book(a real poem)which touches us at the moment. They give us hope ,power and love which guide us get to the future we dreamed.
Love the life we lived and enrich it everyday.You have the possibities to make the day bright and colourful if you like. Today is the present and tomorrow is another day!
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Poetry and the Future
There are not only a mess in front of us in this word, but also poetry and the future. Whenever I feel tired or frustrated, I think of this thought and it gives me power and hope. But sometimes I am really puzzled wherein happiness lies? Where is the future?What is the poem?Now after more than forty years' experiences and searches, I find happiness lies in our daily life. We must face the realities .We must handle the mess we meet bravely. If we feel tired, we can find poems to feed our soul. The poetry, I think, is different for everyone. It may be a song, a flower, a smile or a book (a real poem) which touches us at the moment. They give us hope ,power and love which guide us towards the future of our dreams.
Love the life we live and enrich it everyday. You have the possibities to make the day bright and colourful if you like. Today is the present and tomorrow is another day!
Thanks for your reading and corrections.
Very well written!
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