This is a meeting minutes about my work, can someone help to correct for me? thanks very much.
I work in a bank, and just get the this duty for recording the meeting, I hide the clasified infromation, can someone help me to correct the sentenses and make it in advanced expressions. thanks very much. If you have Chinese articles need review, I can help.
hereafter is the content that need rectify.
Q1: Is the repayment schedule arranged by percentage or amount due to the latest request of A?
A: We will check with CAU. It is used to be presented by percentage, CAU request to present the amount recently, we will check with CAU and revise it accordingly.
Q2: Subject seems don’t have working capital need, why?
A: Subject usually holds deposit received from its customer, so subject maintains sufficient working capital.
Q3: How is the situation of K***?
A: MKT has visited K*** Chongqing in last quarter, the business are similar with Wuhan, customer promised that K**** Chongqing will open an account in our branch after we set relationship with subject.
Q4: The age of Mr. R***is incorrect in the CA,
A: Will amend and pay attention to it.
Comments from BM: Please pay high attention on the details of the information, we can’t accept minor mistakes. Don’t copy information from other place without review and modify.
Q5: Where is the CG company located? It is not presented specifically in CA.
A: The CG company is K**** Limited. It is registered in Bermuda, while listed on The Stock Exchange of Hong Kong Limited.AO will highlight the CG company in the shareholder structure.
Q6: What is the business volume distribution of the group? Where is the best business of group?
A: The business is mainly in Southeast Asia. China market occupies the highest percentage of the business volume.
Q7: Does subject need foreign currency?
A: No.
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Q8: Is the working capital calculate formula inapplicable to subject?
A: Yes, the formula is for manufacturing industry, subject is in service industry.
Q9: What is the management team of subject? Please insert a list of the management team of subject but not only the team of group and branch office.
A: Will revise.
Q10: What is the Other Long Term Assets of RMB15.5Mn in the balance sheet?
A: It is the Deposit of LUR.
Q11: What is the difference of the business between subject and group’s branch office in Wuhan?
A: Wuhan branch is mainly engaged in distribution, subject is mainly engaged in warehouse rent and other business.
Q12: How to divide the profit after subject start business?
A: The profit will divided by its internal policy.
Q13: We need more details information of CG, because we need to process the CG signing issue subsequently.
A: Will revise.
Q14: There are 3 main customers of group’s branch office, after subject start business, will the business shifted to subject of these 3 customers?
A: Yes, branch office of group will shift the business to subject, and will recommend some other new customers based on the new business type of subject.
Q15: What is situation of the international freight forwarding business of group?
A: They provide the vast majority of international freight forwarding services for intra-Asia and between Asia and Europe.
Q16: What is the target customer of subject?
A: Base on the group’s old customers and expand new customer in Wuhan.
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