The Trip! (1)
A few days ago, I went on a trip to Xinjiang, and it's awesome!Let me show you about it-------
When I was a little kid, I thought Xinjiang is an amazing place.There are a lot of deserts, delicious food, and drinks.
Years later, my parents wanna take me on a trip to Xinjiang and play.I was so happy to hear that:''This is AWESOME!''I said.''Then let's go!''my parents said, as they finished the stuff.
On the plane, when I looked the ground, I saw people on the ground is getting smaller and smaller, and that's mean I was closer to Xinjiang.''This is so nice!''I thought as I closed my eyes and smiled.
Here I am, Xinjiang!!!
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The Trip! (1)
A few days ago, I went on a trip to Xinjiang, and it's awesome! Let me show tell you about it.When I was a little kid, I thought Xinjiang is was an amazing place.There are were a lot of deserts, delicious food, and drinks.
Years later, my parents wanna wanted to take me on a trip to Xinjiang and play. I was so happy to hear that. ''This is AWESOME!'' I said. ''Then let's go!'' my parents said, as they finished the stuff. [?? finished packing?]
On the plane, when I looked at the ground, I saw people on the ground is getting smaller and smaller, and that's meant I was closer to Xinjiang. ''This is so nice!'' I thought as I closed my eyes and smiled.
Here I am, in Xinjiang!!!
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