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IELTS Writing task 1 ( day 02 ) The pie charts represent the outcome of a questionnaire that asked guests to the Parkway Hotel with the aims of rated its customer service. The survey was made in the years 2005 also in 2010 and evaluated 100 of visitors. Let's first look at the left pie chart of 2005. It shows three biggest part of the graph which added than 80 per cent of the answers. This big part of qualifications is between the three worst qualities of the service: that are satisfactory, poor and very poor. In addition, just a 5 % of the people's answers choose the best quality as theirs option. On the other hand, in 2010 the changes compared with 5 years later were absolutely positives. People choose about 70% if is added the best two option, excellent and good. That means an increase of 2 times if it was compared with the previous results. Certainly it had been a dramatic rise in the quality of the service and this is possible to observe in the middle of the statistics with satisfactory as answer represented 17 % of the preferences. Besides, the worse result it is means a very poor and poor quality fell from 36 % to 16 %, almost a half.

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IELTS Writing task 1 ( day 02 )

The pie charts represent the outcome of a questionnaire that surveyed the guests of the Parkway Hotel with the aims of rating its customer service. The survey was made in the years 2005 and 2010 and evaluated 100 of guests.
Let's first look at the left pie chart of 2005. It shows that the three biggest parts of the graph, which sums up more than 80 percent of the answers, This big part of qualifications is between are the three worst qualities of the service: that are satisfactory, poor and very poor. In addition, just a 5% of the guests people's answers chose the best quality as theirs option.
On the other hand, in 2010, the changes compared with 5 years before were absolutely positives. About 70% of the people chose the best two options: excellent and good. That means an increase of 2 times when compared with the previous results. Certainly, there has been a dramatic rise in the quality of the service and it is possible to observe in the middle of the statistics with satisfactory as an answer representing 17% of the preferences. In addition, the worse ratings, which are very poor and poor qualities, fell from 36% to 16%, almost a half.

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