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IELTS Writing task 1 ( day 01 ) The line graph illustrates how was changing the number of University graduates in Canada considering the period between 1992 to 2007, which was divided by gender . First of all, both lines graph is had a similar tendency during the years showing, it means that as females and males started with the same constant rise from 1992 to 1995 and for the next three years the total number of graduations in Canada's Universities fallen slightly. Over the rest of the period both rates experimented a steep increase until the end of the time axis. However, there is a quite difference between the number of males and females graduations which is the scale of the number of graduates. From the beginning until the end there was a gap between men and women in addition this difference was growing up until women reached 50,000 more graduates than men in 2007. That means an increase around 66 per cent on females graduates than males. Besides there was rise about 40% in the total number of graduates in five years.

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IELTS Writing task 1 ( day 01 )

The line graph illustrates how the number of graduates from Canadian universities changed during was changing the number of University graduates in Canada considering the period from between 1992 to 2007, which was divided by gender.
First of all, both lines graph is had a similar tendency during these the years showing, it meaning means that as females and males started with the same constant rise from 1992 to1995 and for the next three years the total number of graduations in Canada's Universities fell fallen slightly.  For the remainder Over the rest of the period both rates experienced experimented a steep increase until the end of the time axis.
However, there is a quite difference between the number of males and females graduates graduations which is the scale on the X axis. of the number of graduates.  From the beginning until the end there was a gap between men and women and in addition this difference was increasing growing up until women reached 50,000 more graduates than men in 2007. That means an increase around 66 per cent on females graduates than males. Besides this, there was a rise of about 40% in the total number of graduates in five years.

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