Search from various English teachers...
France flagLili
Writing from a picture :-) Hello! I did not know what to write and just write on the spur of the moment while listening a song (Kouya wo aruke by Asian Kung Fu Generation.) I attached to this entry a picture from the video clip. Don't hesitate to change sentences if you find a better way to say it. Thank you for your help in advance. It's highly appreciated. :-) Wandering in a back alley, the young lady of 20 years old put her headphone, listening to her favourite rock band, isolated from the world. Still, she could feel the air ruffling her bare arms and face. She closed her eyes, smiling, enjoying the blissful joy of the moment. She could imagine the oak leaves rustled in one of the garden while listening the bass pounding on her temples. She was in her inner world and can fully create and detail the real beauty : perceptions, feelings. It is neither real, nor unreal, just amplified perceptions from dull reality combined to the melodic voice of her favourite band. She could not understand the lyrics but it was even more wonderful. She could imagine it, adjust it to her mood and environment. It was the best way to feel immersed in a delightful daydreaming. She reached the end of the back alley, light was so bright in the perpendicualr street, She took a sharp left, put her hood on her head hiding her raven sleek hair and allowing her to avoid eyes contact with pedestrians. Shop fronts create a cozy atmosphere by adding touch of lights between blinding street lamps. She walked a few miles before finding the right spot; a kindergarden park was on the corner and a ramp was just at the corner. She could observe people walking, the cozy light coming from shops and also dark trees' ballet following wind music. She leaned on the ramp, inhales deeply and finally exhales with a content smile on her face. If someone who reads it feel like giving me a picture to describe, that would be great! I want to try to expand on description and details. We could also try to do a challenge: I can write in English and someone can write it either in English or in French. :-)

Corrections · 2

1

Writing from a picture :-)

Hello! I did not know what to write and just write on the spur of the moment while listening a song (Kouya wo aruke by Asian Kung Fu Generation.) I attached to this entry a picture from the video clip. Don't hesitate to change sentences if you find a better way to say it. Thank you for your help in advance. It's highly appreciated. :-)


Wandering in a back alley, the 20 year-old young lady of 20 years old put on her headphones and listened to her favorite rock band, isolated from the world. Still, she could feel the air rushing against her bare arms and face. She closed her eyes, smiling, and enjoyed the blissful joy (kind of redundant to say enjoyed the joy) of the moment. She could imagine the oak leaves rustling in one of the gardens while listening to the bass pounding on her temples. She was in her inner world and could fully create and detail the real beauty : her perceptions, her feelings. It is neither real, nor unreal, just amplified perceptions from her dull reality combined with the melodic voice of her favorite band. She could not understand the lyrics, but that made it even more wonderful. She could imagine it, adjust it to her mood and environment. It was the best way to feel immersed in a delightful daydreaming.

She reached the end of the back alley; the light was so bright in the perpendicular street. She took a sharp left, putting her hood over her head to hide her raven sleek hair and allowing her to avoid eyes contact with pedestrians. Shop fronts created a cozy atmosphere by adding a touch of lights between the blinding street lamps. She walked a few miles before finding the right spot, a kindergarten park was on the corner next to a ramp. She could observe people walking, the cozy light coming from shops, and also the ballet of the dark trees ballet following the music/sound of the wind. She leaned on the ramp, inhaled deeply and finally exhaled with a content smile on her face.

If someone who reads it feel like giving me a picture to describe, that would be great! I want to try to expand on description and details. We could also try to do a challenge: I can write in English and someone can write it either in English or in French. :-)

Want to progress faster?

Join this learning community and try out free exercises!

Don’t miss out on the opportunity to learn a language from the comfort of your own home. Browse our selection of experienced language tutors and enroll in your first lesson now!

Start Learning Today