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MY JOURNAL: DAY 1 My application has been accepted in few universities and after have done all paperwork, I am matriculated at Law Master at Universidad Autónoma de Madrid yesterday. In this new stage, analyzing my emotions I find some of illusion and joy but feel downcast so I will cause letdown to achieve my goals, but you know what? When I fall I will wake and will continue go-ahead so one must survive in this dark and ruthless world. My main priority would be conciliate my postgraduate studies with my internship in a lawyer´s office. It´s an arduous and gruelling task which implicates a great coordination and strict discipline in order to face up against exams and job duties in a flawless way. Despite these obstacles it will an outstanding experience undergoing which helps me to acquire more background relevant in my professional career. Other hand, I would focus to obtain other valuable skills such as: ECDL known as European Computer Driving License to show my technological aptitudes, languages certificates which are credentials of your domain of abilities of languages and writing and oratory courses so are considered esteemed abilities which allow it execute main tasks in a great majority of post. Seeing my objectives it can say that I will have a hard road ahead although I trust time give me reason. Most important factor is enjoying while one are learning because when you realise it you will fulfill it!

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MY JOURNAL: DAY 1

My application has been accepted in a few universities and after have done all paperwork, I was matriculated at Law Master at Universidad Autónoma de Madrid yesterday. In this new stage, analyzing my emotions, I find both illusion and joy but also feel downcast so I will cause letdown to achieve my goals, but you know what? If I fall I will wake and will continue to move because one must survive in this dark and ruthless world.

My main priority would be coordinate my postgraduate studies with my internship in a law firm. It´s an arduous and gruelling task which demands a great coordination and strict discipline in order to face up against exams and job duties in a flawless way. Despite these obstacles it will be an outstanding experience, undergoing which helps me to acquire more background relevant to my professional career.

On the other hand, I would focus on obtaining other valuable skills such as: ECDL known as European Computer Driving License to show my technological skills, languages certificates, which are credentials of your level of languages abilities  and writing and oratory courses, which are considered esteemed abilities and make it possible to execute main tasks in a wide range of positions.

Seeing my objectives, it is clear that I will have a hard road ahead although I trust time will give me clarity. The most important factor is enjoying life while one are learning, because when you imagine it you will fulfill it!

a few  – "several" would also work well here

downcast downcast is probably too strong here.

so I will cause letdown to achieve my goals, – I'm not sure what you mean.

demands – "requires" or "involves" would also work as synonyms

execute– "carry out" would be a good choice here as well

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