Today is my birthday
Today is my birthday.
I'm 24 years old.
Age of 24 is when my father gave to birth his first child.
At the same age, he became a father but I'm still a child.
Now I'm looking forward to a birthday dinner on a train on my way home.
Perhaps my father is making a paella.
I really love his cooking!
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Today is my birthday.
At the age of 24 is when my father gave to birth to his first child.
At the same age, he became a father, but I am still a child.
Now I'm looking forward to a birthday dinner on the bus on my way home.
Now I'm on the bus on the way home, and I'm looking forward to a birthday dinner.
You made it sound as though you were going to eat a meal while on the bus. I had to read the sentence a few times to figure out what you actually meant. I thought that you meant you were going to eat paella on the bus! That would not be a good idea, as the smell would bother the other passengers.
Perhaps my father is making a paella. Good.
I really love his cooking! Good.
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Today is my birthday
Today is my birthday.I'm 24 years old.
Age of 24 is when my At 24 years old, my father gave birth to his first child.
At the same age he became a father, but I am still a child.
Now I'm looking forward to a birthday dinner as I wait on the bus on my way home.
Perhaps my father is making a paella.
I really love his cooking!
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Thank you for everyone:)
I had a great time on my birthday!
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Yes, Happy Birthday!
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I have nothing else to add the other's corrections except... HAPPY BIRTHDAY! :)
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