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My city in Brazil ( passive with modals ) I lived in a beautiful city in Brazil whose name is São José before I came to the USA, but I believe some things could be improved there.First, I think we could redesign the sidewalks because the sidewalks in São José have many holes and this is dangerous for the pedestrians.We have a lot of public squares around the city and the city hall could build more playgrounds in these places. The city is beautiful but we always can plant more trees by the way the parks should be cleaned and cared by everyone who enjoys the place.Another common problem is the graffiti on the walls, the cleaning of this graphite could be done regularly to maintain a cleaner and nice environment. People often use cars to travel short distances, so the people should be walked more with bicycles than cars to decrease the traffic and it is also very important that future administrations do not change the elderly care program that works very well in São José. However, in my opinion, the most important thing to improve in São José is the public hospital because there is the main place of emergency care and the hospital needs more money to work well.This changes can make my loved city a better place to live!

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My city in Brazil ( passive with modals )

I lived in a beautiful city in Brazil whose name is São José before I came to the USA, but I believe some things could be improved there. First, I think we could redesign the sidewalks because the sidewalks in São José have many holes and this is dangerous for the pedestrians. Even though we have a lot of public squares around the city, and the city hall could build more playgrounds in these places. The city is beautiful, but we can always can plant more trees. by the way In fact, the parks should be cleaned and cared for by everyone who enjoys the place. Another common problem is the graffiti on the walls, the cleaning up of this graphite graffiti could be done regularly to maintain a cleaner and nice environment. People often use cars to travel short distances, so the people bicycles should be walked ridden more with bicycles than cars to decrease the traffic, and it is also very important that future administrations do not change the elderly care program that works very well in São José. However, in my opinion, the most important thing to improve in São José is the public hospital because there this is the main place of emergency care, and the hospital needs more money to work well (function properly). This These changes can make my loved city a better place to live!


Well done Fernanda! :-)

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