Presentation and doubts
Hello! I didn't know if someone would read this entry, but I want to present myself anyway.
I'm Fabiola, but I prefer "Faby". I'm venezuelan and I have a really urgent need to learn English, because I will be moving to USA soon (probably). My biggest problems are the pronuntiation and the listening, but I don't know well enough how this plataform works to looking for a partner who wants to practice with me. I already create my profile, though. I think that would be a waste just surrender here, so I prefer to practice my skills writing (I know they aren't enough yet).
I love create short stories (most of the time I never end them, though) about romances, fantasy, some times something dark like horror or blood-related things, so you could be sure that I will come back and I will wrote something for your enjoyment and my practice (is a win-win situation, I think).
So thank you very much for reading all this entry, I will be waiting for your correction!
Again, thank you and nice to meet you!
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My introduction and request for your critique
Hello! I don't know if someone would read this entry, but I want to introduce myself anyway.I'm Fabiola, but I prefer to be called "Faby". I'm Venezuelan and I really have an really urgent need to learn English, because I will probably be moving to the USA soon (probably). My biggest problems are with pronunciation and the listening, but I am not familiar with don't know well enough how this platform works to looking for a partner who wants to practise with me. Nevertheless, I have already created my profile, though. I think that it would be a pity to give up waste just surrender here, so I prefer to practise my skills writing (I know they aren't good enough yet).
I love to create short stories though most of the time I do not complete them most of the time end them, though) . My stories are about romances, fantasy, some times something dark like horror or gore. blood related things, so You can could be sure that I will come back and I will wrote write something for your reading pleasure and enjoyment and my practice (I think it is a win-win situation).
So thank you very much for reading all this entry, I will be waiting for your correction!
Again, thank you and nice to meet you!
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Presentation and questions
Hello! I do not know if anyone will read this entry but I want to present myself anyway.I'm Fabiola, but I prefer "Faby". I'm Venezuelan and I have a really urgent need to learn English, because I will probably be moving to the USA soon. My biggest problems are my pronunciation and my listening, but I don't know well enough how this platform works to look for a partner who wants to practice with me. I already created my profile, though. I think that would be a waste just to stop there, so I want also to practice my writing which I know is not good enough yet.
I love create to short stories (most of the time unfinished) about romance, fantasy, sometimes something dark like horror or sanguine things, so you can be sure that I will come back and I will wrote something for your enjoyment and my practice (it is a win-win* situation, I think).
So, thank you very much for reading this entry and I will be waiting for your corrections!
Again, thank you and nice to meet you!
*or, .. a can't lose situation, ...
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