My First Badminton Class on July, 22nd
I planned to go to a training class of badminton which is on every Saturday half mouth ago. The gym where the class takes place isn't very far away from where I live, but walking to there still takes some time. Thus, taking bus is the best choice. However, taking bus to the gym is not convenient to me, for there is no bus directed to there and I have to transfer from one bus to another. Worse, the bus I will transfer to arrives at the stop almost 40mins later than the bus I take the first. Being lazy of figuring out the fastest route, I chose the easiest way to reach my destiny----walking.
On the day before the class, I was reading and playing computer until midnight. As a result, the bell which should have woken me up at 8 A.M the next morning didn't wake me up. When I got up, It was already 8:40. I would definitely be late, but I still cannot give up going to the class because I had given it up for the same reason last Saturday and being defeated by drowsiness and laziness for twice is shaming :(.
Finally, after 20-minute walking and having breakfast beside the gym, I went into the gym at 9:20 and saw a coach and some students had already started practicing in the badminton court. The coach spotted me, and after a simple self-introduction I started my practice. I was extremely nervous because I had not even touched a badminton racket since I was 14 (I'm 20 now). When the badminton came to me, I could not hit it. The coach was patient, telling me not to be anxious. I gradually could hit the badminton and by my hitting it flied a high and far curve to the other side of the court.
I practiced for three hours and had never felt so tired physically since senior high. I'm looking forward to the next time and I hope I will do a better job.
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My First Badminton Class on July, 22nd
I planned to go to a badminton training class which is on every Saturday since half a month ago. The gym where the class takes place isn't very far away from where I live, but walking there still takes some time. Thus, taking the bus is the best choice. However, taking the bus to the gym is not convenient to me, for there is no bus directed to there and I have to transfer from one bus to another. Even worse, the bus I will transfer to arrives at the stop almost 40mins later than the first bus I take. Being lazy of figuring out the fastest route, I chose the easiest way to reach my destination----walking.On the day before the class, I was reading and playing computer until midnight. As a result, the alarm which should have woken me up at 8 A.M the next morning didn't wake me up. When I got up, It was already 8:40. I would definitely be late, but I still cannot give up going to the class because I had given it up for the same reason last Saturday and being defeated by drowsiness and laziness for twice is shaming :(.
Finally, after 20-minute walking and having breakfast beside the gym, I went into the gym at 9:20 and saw a coach and some students had already started practicing in the badminton court. The coach spotted me, and after a simple self-introduction I started my practice. I was extremely nervous because I have not even touched a badminton racket since I was 14 (I'm 20 now). When the badminton came to me, I could not hit it. The coach was patient, telling me not to be anxious. I gradually could hit the badminton and by hitting i mean it flied a high and far curve to the other side of the court.
I practiced for three hours and had never felt so tired physically since senior high. I'm looking forward to the next time and I hope I will do a better job.
great job!!!
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My First Badminton Class on July, 22nd
I planned to go to a badminton training class (similar to how you would say 中文课 instead of 课的中文) which is on every Saturday starting half a month ago (can also say since but I think starting sounds better, originally with just "on every Saturday half a month ago" means the classes were happening every Saturday but stopped half a month ago). The gym where the class takes place isn't very far away from where I live, but walking there (this is just an exception with English grammar, we say "walking there" and "walking here" (usually "walking over here" actually)) still takes some time. Thus, taking the bus (have to have a concrete object here, uses collective "the" since it is a system and can't make reference to one bus) is the best choice. However, taking the bus to the gym is not convenient to me, for ("as" sounds more natural here maybe, for is all right) there is no bus going directly (I don't exactly like this wording and can't give much explanation, other options could also be "there is not direct bus there", "the bus doesn't directly go there", "there is no bus route without transfers", "there is no direct bus route", not all of these have the same meaning though they are roughly the same) there and I have to transfer from one bus to another. Even worse, the bus I ("will" sounds like you will only do this once, this is a regular action so this conjugation is better) transfer to arrives at the stop almost 40mins later than the first bus I take (here "first" modifies "the bus" which is followed by the detail "I take"). Being too lazy to figure (I think this is what you wanted to say) out the fastest route, I chose the easiest way to reach my destination----walking.On the day before the class, I was reading and playing on my (computer isn't a type of thing you can play, this way we use it as a description to where you are playing) computer until midnight. As a result, my (should use personal description as it is used to wake you up) alarm which should have woken me up at 8 A.M the next morning didn't wake me up (I think a better way to phrase this is "As a result, my alarm for 8 A.M. didn't wake me up). When I got up, It was already 8:40. I would definitely be late, but I still cannot give up going to the class because I had given it up for the same reason last Saturday, and being defeated by drowsiness and laziness for twice is shameful (should use the adjective and not the noun since it is describing the situation) :(.
Finally, after 20-minute walking and having breakfast beside the gym, I went into the gym at 9:20 and saw a coach and some students had already started practicing on (just like how you'd say you are on a stage like in Chinese 在舞台上) the badminton court. The coach spotted me, and after a simple self-introduction I started my practice. I was extremely nervous because I had not even touched a badminton racket since I was 14 (I'm 20 now). When the badminton came to me, I could not hit it. The coach was patient, telling me not to be anxious. I gradually could hit the badminton and with my hits it (not sure how to explain, just sounds better in this situation) flew (an irregular verb) a high and far curve to the other side of the court.
I practiced for three hours and had never felt so physically tired (you might say it the other way around in speaking, but written is best like this) since senior high. I'm looking forward to the next time and I hope I will do a better job.
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