Advantages and disadvantages of the use of bikes in the city.
Nowadays in our societies is very usually the use of the bicycle to move around the city.
Every type of people use this means of transport, since business people to children and students, it is a suitable option for everybody.
Also, it is true that the use of the bicycle has advantages and disadvantages.
First, It is cheaper than to have a car, and also is healthier because you can do exercise while you are going to your destination. In addition, it is easier to park in the city center, and many times is faster even, most especially at rush hour when big jams forms.
On the other hand, there are also other disadvantages. For example, in summer when we have high temperatures is so tired moves with this vehicle. Unfortunately, another enormous disadvantage is the security, the last days have been a lot of accidents involving cyclists with fatal consequences.
In conclusion, the bicycle is a good option to move around the cities but we should exercise caution with this vehicle.
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Advantages and disadvantages of the use of bikes in the city.
Nowadays in our societies the use of the bicycle to move around the city is very common. [this is correct but rather formal] Every type of people use this means of transport, since business people to children and students, it is a suitable option for everybody. [this sentence doesn't really make sense - see below]Nowadays in our societies cycling is a very popular way of getting around in the city. All kinds of people use this means of transport, from business people to children and students, since anybody can ride a bike.
Also, it is true that the use of the bicycle has advantages and disadvantages.
First, It is cheaper than to have a car, and also is healthier because you can do exercise while you are going to your destination. [this would sound very formal] In addition, it is easier to park in the city center, and many times is faster even, most especially [you can't say 'most especially', because 'especially' is already superlative] at rush hour when big jams form. [form not forms is correct for plural, but see below for more idiomatic version].
It's true that cycling has both advantages and disadvantages. Firstly, it's cheaper than having a car, and also healthier, because you can exercise at the same time as getting to wherever you need to go. In addition, you can leave your bike anywhere, so you don't have to find somewhere to park the car in the city centre. Also, it's often quicker to cycle than drive, especially at rush hour when there are big traffic jams/when there is a lot of traffic.
On the other hand, there are also other [only use 'other' if you have already mentioned some disadvantages]disadvantages. For example, in summer when we have high temperatures is so tired moves [doesn't really make sense] with this vehicle [we don't really use vehicle to refer to a bicycle except in very formal language]2. Unfortunately, another enormous disadvantage is the security, the last days ['recently' is the correct way to say this] there have been a lot of accidents involving cyclists with fatal consequences.
On the other hand, there are also disadvantages. For example, when it is very hot in summer cycling is very tiring. Unfortunately, another big disadvantage is safety, as recently there have been a lot of fatal accidents involving cyclists.
In conclusion, the bicycle is a good option to move around the cities but we should exercise caution with this vehicle. [very formal]
In conclusion, cycling is a good way to get around the city, but we should take care when using this means of transport.
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The pros and cons of a bike in the city.
Nowadays it is normal to bicycle around the city.Persons of all sorts cycle, from business people to children and students. It is suitable for everybody.
Cycling also has its ups and downs.
First, It is cheaper than driving, and also it is healthier because you must exercise while cycling. In addition, it is easier to park in the city center, and often it is also faster, most especially in the rush hour when big jams form.
On the other hand, there are some disadvantages. For example, in summer when it's hot, cycling is so tiring. Unfortunately, another big downer is the security, and recently there have been many lethal accidents involving cyclists.
In conclusion, the bicycle is a good option to move around the cities but we should exercise caution with this vehicle.
Very well written!
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