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I prefer Summer. I prefer summer because this season is many fun of things. First my birthday is on summer. I can be given presents and hold many party. Second I prefer sea and beach and sea of activities. When Japan is summer, I often go beach. Finally I prefer summer because there are sea or birthday.

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I prefer Summer.

I prefer summer because this season has many fun things. First my birthday is in summer. I am given presents and have many parties. Second I prefer the beach and the sea. When it is summer in Japan, I often go to the beach. Finally, I prefer summer just because summer is awesome.
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I prefer Summer.

I prefer Summer* because this season is fun for many things. First: my birthday is in Summer! I can be given presents and hold many parties. Second: I prefer sea and beach and marine activities. In the Summer in Japan, I often go to the beach. In summary, I prefer Summer because of the sea and my birthday.

Very well written!

*Summer or summer, Winter or winter etc, are all good English.

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