Please correct my grammar!!!
Yesterday I met up with my friend at cafe just hangout. He is an English teacher from Australia. He has been to Japan for 3 years. But he can't speak Japanese. My English level is still low so I couldn't tell him my mind and feeling a lot. But I never give up for my future dreams. Anyway yesterday I spend good time with him. I could take an English shower.
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Please correct my grammar!!!
(1) Yesterday, I met up with my friend and hung out at a cafe just hangout. He is an English teacher from Australia. He has been (2) in Japan for three years. But (3) However, he can't speak Japanese. My English proficiency level is still quite low so I couldn't tell him clearly what I had in my mind and how I felt feeling a lot. But Despite that, I will never give up on my future dreams. Anyway, yesterday I spent a good time with him yesterday. I could take an English shower. (I am not sure if I understand what you mean by writing "English shower". Do you mean "English lesson"?)Hi Uraran,
Just a few suggestions for you:
(1) When we start a sentence with an adverb, we separate the adverb from the rest of the sentence with a comma.
(2) When you write "been to Japan for three years", it sounds a little odd because it may mean that your journey to Japan took three years. However, we can understand if you write "He has been to Japan three times", meaning you flew to Japan on three separate occasions.
(3) We try not to start a sentence with "But / And" unless we are writing very informally or speaking casually. Some writer may start a sentence with these words to create an impact, but we have many conjunctions that can convey the same meaning (eg However, Nevertheless, Furthermore etc.)
Hope this helps.
Cheers,
Lance
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Please correct my grammar!!!
Yesterday I met with my friend at the cafe "Just Hangout". He is an English teacher from Australia. He has been in Japan for the last 3 years but still he can't speak Japanese. My English level is still low so I couldn't tell him much of my mind or feelings. But I never give up for my future dreams. Anyway yesterday I spent a good time with him. I could take an English shower.Very well written!
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