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Ho Chi Minh part 1 HO CHI MINH I met my friend, Susan for the first time in a backpacker hostel in Singapore. She got stuck on the door as she brought a really big suitcase with her. I opened the door for her as I needed to go out whilst she needed to go in. Then, as I came back to the hotel, I found out that she was one of my roommates. There was another guest from Philippines, she was a quiet person but friendly, and of course my friend, Susan. Traveling to many countries has trained me to be a bit more easy-going and open minded person. I used to be quiet, I never greeted any people which I didn’t know well until I travelled by myself. Staying in a dormitory in a hostel and meeting many people makes me getting easier and easier to keep a conversation with any kind of people. So, I started to ask her some casual questions: where you were from, where you come from and etc. And guess what! She had just come back from my country: from Bali as she had got a job there. And me, in two months I will fly to Ho Chi Minh! So, we talked more and more and spent the second day going around together in Singapore. She promised me to escort me when I came to her country! So, that’s a brief story of how I got a new Vietnamese friend.

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Ho Chi Minh, Part 1

HO CHI MINH
I met my friend, Susan for the first time in a backpacker hostel in Singapore. She had gotten stuck on the door, as she (had) brought a really big suitcase with her. I opened the door for her as I needed to go out whilst she needed to go in. Then, as I came back to the hotel, I found out that she was one of my roommates. There was another guest from the Philippines, she was a quiet person but friendly, and of course my friend, Susan.
Traveling to many countries has trained me to be a bit more easy-going and an open-minded person. I used to be quiet, I never greeted anyone people which who* I didn’t know well until I travelled** by myself. Staying in a dormitory in a hostel and meeting many people makes me getting it easier and easier for me to keep a conversation going with any all kinds of people. So, I started to asking her some casual questions: where are you were from, where do you come from, and etc. And guess what! She had just come back from my country, from Bali, as she had gotten a job there. And me, in two months, I will fly to Ho Chi Minh! So, we talked more and more and spent the second day going around together in Singapore. She promised me to escort me*** when I came to her country!
So, that’s a the brief story of how I got a new Vietnamese friend.


*People are always "who".

**Not incorrect per se, but inconsistent. Either it's the British spelling (travelling, travelled) or American ("traveled", traveling").

***Better: "to show me around", "to take me on a tour". "To escort" implies a more professional capacity.

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