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my idol my favorite idol is onedirection.I love them very much!although my English is not good, I'm trying my best to sing their songs .every time I heard their songs,Ifeel so good.it just like that the world was full of sunshine and warmth.

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Hi Vicky.

I hope this helps :)

My idol

My favorite idol band is One direction. I love them very much! Although my English is not good, I'm trying my best to sing their songs. Every time I heard hear* their songs, I feel so good. It is just like that the world was is full of sunshine and warmth.


*Use the present simple tense

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my idol

my favorite idol is onedirection.  -->> my favorite idols  are  the guys in onedirection. -->>  my favorite boy band  is onedirection.   

I love them very much!

although my English is not good, I'm trying my best to sing their songs .

every time I heard their songs,Ifeel so good. -->>  every time I hear their songs,Ifeel so good.

it just like that the world was full of sunshine and warmth.  -->> it is  just like the world is full of sunshine and warmth.

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