Loneliness
As a privileged witness to the hustle and bustle of everyday life in Paris “La Défense”, Europe’s largest purpose-built business district, I am regularly amazed by the stark contrasts that such a unique environment can reveal. Is it enhanced by the gigantism of the architecture? Or by the no less gigantic sea of people, workers and tourists, crossing each other’s paths daily in general indifference? The manifestations of loneliness are easy to notice for any attentive observer.
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Loneliness
As a privileged witness to the hustle and bustle of everyday life in Paris's “La Défense”, Europe’s largest purpose-built business district, I am regularly amazed by the stark contrasts that such a unique environment can reveal. Is it enhanced by the giganticism of the architecture? Or by the no less gigantic sea of people, workers and tourists, daily criss-crossing each other’s paths in general indifference? The manifestations of loneliness are easily noticed by the casual observer.Very well written!
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Not at all. Besides, this definitely feels like something out of a novel. You have a lot more leeway with how you write when it's for artistic or expressive purposes rather than formal, informal, or academic settings.
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Thank you very much William. I was mainly worried about potential clumsy wording.
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Excellent and interesting piece. I found no mistakes.
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