Some people think family has the most powerful influence on children's development. Others,.....
Topic:Some people think family has the most powerful influence on children's development. Others,however, believe that other things have greater effects. Discuss both views and give your own opinion
In contemporary society, there is a hot discuss on children’s development. Some believe that family are able to affect children’s development, while others argue that other things like school education can play an important role in the development of the next generation.
Parents are the first teacher for their children,so many behaviors of children are affected by their parents. Parents promote children to be with good characters,such as honest, brave, confident,etc. Parents always set good example for children. Many children could not only inherit good characters from parents, but also inherit their career. For example, if there is a successful doctor in a family, it is possible that their son or daughter prefer to choose doctor as their career. Furthermore, parents can have positive impact on children’s value of world and life, which is necessary element for children’s development.
On the other hand, other things like school education has become an indispensable part of children’s development. Schools enable to provide comprehensive education, because a plethora of education resource is available. In school, many knowledgeable teachers impart knowledge to children, which develop children’s intelligence.
In my view, no matter family or other things like school education are all useful and helpful for children’s development. We should combine with the advantage of all aspects to cultivate children.
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