First impressions about my nose surgery It's been seven days since I underwent a nose surgery, most exactly a septum deviation surgery. Despite the fact that has blood going outside of my nose all the

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AndréLuiz da Silva

First impressions about my nose surgery It's been seven days since I underwent a nose surgery, most exactly a septum deviation surgery. Despite the fact that has blood going outside of my nose all the time, I wouldn't never going back on my decision. So, if you get sinus infections frequently and your doctor have said that the best solution is a surgery procedure, then go ahead and do that. Might as well get your nose blooding for a couple of days than get infections during your entire life keeping your septum as is.

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First impressions about my nose surgery

It's been seven days since I underwent a nose surgery, most exactly a septum deviation surgery. Despite the fact that has blood going outside of my nose all the time, I wouldn't never going back on my decision. So, if you get sinus infections frequently and your doctor have said that the best solution is a surgery procedure, then go ahead and do that. Might as
well get your nose blooding for a couple of days than get infections during your entire life keeping your septum as is.

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And about the septum surgery, I'll be doing it soon. I'm glad to know that it's really good and helpful :)

First impressions about my nose surgery

It's been seven days since I underwent a nose surgery, most more exactly specifically a septum deviation surgery. Despite the fact that there has been blood going running outside out of my nose all the time, I wouldn't never ever going go back on my decision. So, if you get sinus infections frequently and your doctor have has said that the best solution is a surgery surgical procedure, then go ahead and do that. Might as
well get have your nose blooding bloody for a couple of days rather than get infections during your entire life --keeping your septum as is.

Hi André,

Just a couple minor mistakes. Third person verb agreement, watch out for passive language, adjectives ("surgical procedure" and "bloody nose"), and a couple of word choices were changed to a higher frequency to sound more natural ("more specifically" and "blood running out").

Good luck with your healing process!

Jane

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