A cup of tea
My colleagues ordered beverages to their tea time from the tea shop which is famous for its tea. However, I didn’t order one because drinking tea always makes me feel uncomfortable. Every time I drank tea, my heartbeat speeded up and got headache, stomachache. Perhaps I’m much sensitive to caffeine. But I sometimes take a sip of Ceylon black tea. Its smell and taste is full of exotic aroma, so I love it!
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A cup of tea
My colleagues ordered some beverages for their tea time from the tea shop that is famous for its tea. However, I didn’t order one because drinking tea always makes me feel uncomfortable. Every time I drink tea, my heartbeat speeds up and I get a headache and a stomachache. Perhaps I’m very sensitive to caffeine, but I sometimes take a sip of Ceylon black tea. Its smell and taste is full of exotic aroma, so I love it!0
A cup of tea
My colleagues ordered beverages to for their tea time from the tea shop which is famous for its tea. However, I didn’t order one because drinking tea always makes me feel uncomfortable. Every time I drank drink tea, my heartbeat speeded speeds up and got I get a headache, and stomachache. Perhaps I’m much very sensitive to caffeine. But I sometimes take a sip of Ceylon black tea. Its It's smell and taste is full of exotic aroma, so I love it!---------
Good job!
I put beverages in orange because it is correct, but people often do not use this word (it sounds a bit too official). I would say "drinks". However it is not wrong, so I did not put a line through it :)
Note: When you wrote "Every time", you are talking about something that happens also in the future (if you drink coffee next week, for example). Therefore the past tense is not what you wanted. Example:
"Every time I go to the shop" <-- Happens "every time", ALSO in the future
"Every time I went to the shop" <-- Happens "every time", ONLY in the past
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A cup of tea
My colleagues ordered beverages to their at tea time from the tea shop which is famous for its tea. However, I didn’t order one because drinking tea always makes me feel uncomfortable. Every time I drink tea, my heartbeat speeds up and I get a got headache, and a stomachache. Perhaps I’m much very sensitive to caffeine. But I sometimes I take a sip of Ceylon black tea. Its smell and taste are is full of exotic aroma, so I love it!You can include "which is" or leave it out. Personally, I think it sounds more natural without the words.
I changed the verbs to present tense. This is because we use it for "facts". You wrote every time which means it can be considered a fact.
I am not sure about exotic aroma. "Aroma" usually refers to a smell.
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