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YUYING KUANG
People today spend too much time on personal enjoyment-doing things. Do you agree? Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? People today spend too much time on personal enjoyment-doing things they like to do-rather than doing things they should do. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. In contemporary society, I don't agree with the idea that modern people spend too much time on their personal enjoyable things than on things which they really need to do. I think this depends on different cultures. People should find what we want, and try to keep balance with their life, and combine their desirable things with what they have to do. First of all, different cultures and countries have different situations. For example, In my country, Taiwan, we are always forced to do everything that we don't like to do. We need to go to college, and after graduating from college, we need to find an excellent job, earn more money, and get married. It's just like a life pattern, and everyone is pushed by the parents and the society. Fewer people would think deeply about what they really want and like to do. In the second place, people should find the balance between things which we are desirable and things which we should do. However, we need to understand what we need in advance, and don't just push ourselves to do things which we should do. For example, people are force to work overtime in northeast Asia, It's normal for everyone to do this. Fewer people doubt this situation. In this circumstance, people should find the balance between life and work, but not take working overtime for granted. Last but not least, life is short, and we don't need to limit ourselves. Finding desirable things and combining with our job and life are really important. Some famous and successful people do personal enjoyment-doing things, and they get success life. For instance, Hugo was a famous French writer, but his family didn't want him to be a writer at first. He insisted to do thing what he really like to do, and become a well-known writer. In conclusion, I don't agree with the idea that people spend too much time to do enjoyable things they like. I believe people should do things they really like to do, and try to combine with their life and job. Therefore, people will do things with motivation and finish them well.

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