It rains a lot
Yesterday and today, it has rained a lot as ceiling of the ski is cracking. This is blessing to not only farmers in South Korea but common people like me. There was less rain for a few weeks compared to the last year and that has made us unhappy. I usually don't like raining, because heavy rain dirty my clothes, bags, even socks. However, today sound of the rain makes me feel better. Hot sunlight disappeared and cool wind is blowing. I hope there would be at least one small thing today for the people in the world as this rain.(I don't know where the 'today' should be. Please tell me.)
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It rains It has been raining a lot
Yesterday and today, it has rained been raining a lot as ceiling of the ski is cracking as though the heavens have opened. This is a blessing to not only to farmers in South Korea, but also to common <---- I don't know what you mean by "common" people like me. There was had been less rain for a the last few weeks compared to the last year, and that has made us unhappy. I usually don't like raining, because heavy rain dirties my clothes, bags, and even my socks. However, today the sound of the rain makes is making me feel better. The hot sunlight has disappeared and a cool wind is blowing. I hope there would be at least one small thing today for the people in the world as this rain. I hope that all the people in the world can experience something today that makes them happy, in the same way that this rain has made me happy. <---- I think that's what you're trying to say. Am I right?"Common people" normally means:
"people who are not of royal blood" (i.e. people who are not kings or queens), or
"people who are not rich" or
"people who are vulgar and of low class, and have bad manners".
Since none of those things make sense in this particular context, I do not know what you were trying to say.
I think you are trying to talk about "people who are not farmers".
Perhaps you mean "city dwellers" or "people who live in cities" or ""people who don't live in the countryside" or "people in urban locations".
Is that what you mean?
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It rains a lot
Yesterday and today, it has rained a lot as the ceiling of the sky is cracking. This is a blessing to not only farmers in South Korea but common people like me. There was less rain for a few weeks compared to the last year and that has made us unhappy. I usually don't like raining, because heavy rain makes dirty my clothes, bags, even socks dirty. However, today the sound of the rain makes made me feel better. Hot sunlight disappeared and a cool wind is blowing. I hope there would be at least one small thing today for the people in the world as like this rain.(I don't know where the 'today' should be. Please tell me.)0
Thanks!
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You can put 'today' in any position.
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