25/6/17 Journaling Yesterday, I and my friend were spoken to by a stranger who was from Perth on the street. Then he took us out for lunch. I knew it was dangerous a bit because we didn't know him at

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25/6/17 Journaling Yesterday, I and my friend were spoken to by a stranger who was from Perth on the street. Then he took us out for lunch. I knew it was dangerous a bit because we didn't know him at all. But he was nice guy and I was glad to get a opportunity to speak English out of the blue. I was happy to conversation. Today I want surfing. I've broken my legrope but it was fun wave for us. Afterward we went the free yoga class, but it was actually something which is kind of religious. I seemed it was suspicious cult.

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25/6/17 Journaling

Yesterday, on the street I and my friend were spoken to by a stranger who was from Perth spoke to my friend and me on the street. [Avoid passive voice] Then he took us out for lunch. I knew it was a bit dangerous a bit because we didn't know him at all, but he was a nice guy, and I was glad to get an opportunity out of the blue to speak English. I was happy to for the conversation.
Today I want went surfing. I've broken broke my legrope leg rope, but it was fun the waves were fun for us. Afterward we went to the free yoga class, but it was actually something which is kind of religious. It seemed it was like a suspicious cult.

25/6/17 Journaling (-?? This sounds awkward. Did you mean "My Diary"?)

Yesterday (no comma) I and my friend (The correct word order: My friend and I...) were spoken to by a stranger who was from Perth on the street. (The whole sentence doesn't sound natural at all. Probably, it would be best to put it in this way: Yesterday a stranger in the street came up to us and start talking. He was from Perth.) Then he took us out for to lunch. I knew it was a bit dangerous because we didn't know him at all. But he was a nice guy and I was glad to get (better say: to take) an opportunity to speak English out of the blue (I wouldn't use the idiom this way). I was happy to have a conversation with him.
Today I want went surfing. I've broken I broke (Present Simple sounds more natural here) my leg rope, but it was a fun wave for us. Afterward, we went to the a free yoga class, but it was actually something which is kind of religious. I seemed It seemed to me it was some suspicious cult.

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