The trip to Zhouzhuang Ancient Town
I decided to travel to zhouzhuang at May. At frist, I made a date with my workmate, however, she slept over. So I travelled alone.
That day, the sun was very bright. Luckily it wasn't very hot. I felt very comfortable.
Zhouzhuang ,as China's No.1 water town, is famous for its water, the structure of house,the bridge,and its legend.
In zhouzhuang, we can sit in a boat to visit different places, and we even can take the boat into their house,because the river went through their houses.
There has a legend. The leading character did exist, he was a smart and brave man. He became a richest man by himself. So the civilian said he had a bowl, in china it was called ju bao peng, where you put one buck, it would have double.
Because he had too money, and he was richer than the emperor, the sad thing happened, he was exiled in poor soil. Oh,the man's name was shen wansan.
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The trip to Zhouzhuang Ancient Town
I decided to travel to Zhouzhuang in May. First, I made a date with my workmate, however, she overslept. So I travelled alone.That day, the sun was very bright. Luckily it wasn't very hot. I felt very comfortable.
Zhouzhuang, as China's No.1 water town, is famous for its water, the structure of house, the bridge, and its legend.
In Zhouzhuang, we can travel by boat to visit different places, and we even can take the boat into the houses, because the canals go through their houses.
There is a legend. The leading character did exist, he was a smart and brave man. He became a rich man by his own efforts. So the civilian said he had a bowl, in China it was called ju bao peng, where if you put one buck in, it would double.
Because he had a lot of money, and he was richer than the emperor, a sad thing happened, he was exiled to a poor place. Oh, the man's name was Shen Wansan.
Hello Tiya,
An interesting article about Zhouzhang, a man-made river is often called a canal so I changed this word in your article. If you sleep over, you spend the night at a friend's place. If you oversleep, you wake up late! Remember that proper names in English including place names and countries always begin with a capital letter.
Best wishes
Bob
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