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吳慧茹 Doris
To date with friends I had not seen my friends of college for a while. Finally, I met them on Saturday. We ate launch at a restaurant with delicious meal such as pizza and spaghetti. Then we originally planed going to a compound amusement place for reading, throwing the dart, playing shooting basketball machine, playing bowling. Unfortunately, Because of raining, there were so many people that we couldn’t enter. So we changed to go to karaoke.And our ultimate active was that we had a little drink in a small restaurant with live music show. Although it rained all day, we still had a good time.

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To date with friends

I have not seen my friends from college for a while. I finally saw them on Saturday. We ate lunch at a restaurant and had a delicious meal of pizza and spaghetti. We originally planned on going to a compound amusement place where we can read, throw the darts, play on a  basketball machine, and play bowling. Unfortunately, due to the rain, there were so many people that we couldn’t go inside. So we decided to go to a karaoke place. Then we had a little drink in a small restaurant with live music show. Even though it rained all day, we still had a good time.

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To A date with friends

I had not seen my college friends of college for a while. Finally, I finally met them on Saturday. [note: "Finally, ..." sounds like the last step of a series of instructions/events/actions.] We ate launch lunch at a restaurant with which included delicious meal such as entrees  including pizza and spaghetti. Then, we originally planed going planned to go to a compound amusement place for reading, throwing the dart darts, playing shooting basketball machine, playing bowling. Unfortunately, Because of raining, playing the basketball-shooting arcade game, and bowling; however, due to the rain, there were so many people inside that we couldn’t enter. So we changed decided to go to karaoke instead. And our ultimate active activity was that we had a little having a little bit to drink in a small restaurant with a live music show. Although it rained all day, we still had a good time.

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