Last week 2
Last week was good. We had a slumber party with my friends. Also I was on a musical "Waltz of the vampires" . I never went crazy with this theme, although, I read and I like Dracula, and Van Helsing. But I love so much musical! Breathtaking voices! And these songs play in my head a whole week! A plot of this is really plain. There is a girl in small village in Transilvania. She is a daugter of hotel keeper. In this hotel come Professor and his assistant young man Alfred. they are looking for trails of vampires. Alfred fell in love with Sara{daughter} But the main vampire comes to Sara every night and he calls her to his castle. One night she gets away to vampire. Alfred and professor go for her. After waltz, Sara was bitten, and she becames vampire. And she bit Alfred. In the end, we find out about a lots vampires in our time.
Also we were in cinema on "Wonder woman". In general, I like it. But to be honest, this movie for 1 time. I really like the main actress Gal Gadot is a natural beauty. I don't like the end and the main villain {Remus Lupin in Harry Potter}. I like such movies, which you are wathing and you don't want to see the end. You want this film continiue always. You enjoy each scene and music and cast...Wonder woman not such movie. I watched to my swatch 3 times!
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Last week 2
Last week was good. We had a slumber party with my friends. Also I went to a musical "Waltz of the vampires" . I was never crazy about this theme, although I read and I like Dracula, and Van Helsing. But I love so much musicals! Breathtaking voices! And these songs play in my head a whole week! A plot of this is really plain. There is a girl, Sara, in small village in Transilvania who is a daughter of a hotel keeper. In this hotel comes a Professor and his young assistant, Alfred. They are trailing vampires. Alfred falls in love with Sara. But the main vampire comes to Sara every night and he calls her to his castle. One night she gets away from the vampire. Alfred and professor go after her. After the waltz, Sara is bitten and becomes a vampire. And she bites Alfred. In the end, we find out lots about vampires of our time.Also we were in cinema to see "Wonder woman". In general, I liked it. But to be honest, this movie is good for one time only. I really like the main actress Gal Gadot, a natural beauty. I don't like the end and the main villain {Remus Lupin in Harry Potter}. I like movies where I don't want them to end. I want the film to continue always. You enjoy each scene and music and cast...Wonder woman no such a movie. I watched my watch 3 times!*
*or, I washed my watch 3 times! (I hope it was waterproof?)
Very well written!
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