The vineyard who might be something completely different
Today was an exciting day. Me and a friend spent the whole day, discovering an odd place, that I found some months ago. For one of our hobbies is to rediscover history and the hidden places and artifacts, people have forgotten since hundreds of years.
So this place, which we were today, at first glance looks like an abandoned vineyard. But there are some anomalies and also no vine wreath at all. We found some kind of small rooms which turned out to be graves from the year 1880. There was a date and IR which probably stands for the short form of INRI, plus names. All of it engraved in stones.
What else is very suspect about that area is that it is arranged like a pyramid. My intuition is telling me that this place must be much older than around 140 years.
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The vineyard who that might be something completely different
Today was an exciting day. Me and a friend A friend and I spent the whole day, [delete this comma]discovering an odd placeSubject pronouns versus object pronouns
You can't say " me spent the whole day"
That is incorrect.
You need to say "I spent the whole day"
"Me" is an object pronoun. Object pronouns go after verbs.
"I" is a subject pronoun. Subject pronouns go before verbs.
I spent
You spent
He/she/it spent
We spent
They spent
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The vineyard who might be something completely different
Today was an exciting day. Me and a friend spent the whole day, discovering an odd place, that I found some months ago. For One of our hobbies is to rediscover history and the hidden places and artifacts, people have forgotten since hundreds of years ago.So this place, which we were today, at first glance looks like an abandoned vineyard. But there are some anomalies and also no vine wreath at all. We found some kind of small rooms which turned out to be graves from the year 1880. There was a date and IR which probably stands for the short form of INRI, plus names. All of it engraved in stones.
What else is very suspect about that area is that it is arranged like a pyramid. My intuition is telling me that this place must be much older than around 140 years.
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