Reem al kamash
The wise is the one who learns the balance between disclosure and concealment, so that their heart will be failled with regret and remorse.
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Reem al kamash
The wise is the one who learns the balance between revelation* and concealment, so that his their heart will not fail be filled** with regret and remorse.* Are you trying to say "to reveal", as in "openness"? If so, some better words might be: candor, frankness, or disclosure.
'Revelation' usually means "a person suddenly understanding something" or more in the religious context of "understanding (and sharing with the world) a religious message".
** Fail is not incorrect, and the sentence still is understandable; however, generally we speak of the heart being "filled" with something. So it sounds much more natural to say "filled with regret" or "filled with remorse." The only exception would be if you very specifically and deliberately want to say the heart fails (as in the heart literally stops working).
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