This is a diary about how I spent my day in Monkey Bay
13th June
I put an emphasis on the importance of environmental issue during my class. Nuclear energy is more powerful but also more dangerous. I explained to the students that in Japan, we used to utilize nuclear source of energy. However, when it was damaged, it affected a lot of people.
One of the student's father's business brings uranium and other resources from the north to the south of Malawi. However, many students do not know that there are many resources in Malawi. I asked him to research it for us. Malawian may not be rich but Malawi is rich because of its abundant resources.
There is a national strike in progress in primary schools all over Malawi. Teachers protest because they don't get enough salary. Tomorrow it is the national foundation day that's why it's a holiday and we don't need to go to school. In my school, graduation ceremony for High School will be this coming Friday, June 16th. Therefore, we won't be having classes again.
At home, the bulb in my room suddenly got broken last night. I didn't know what the exact cause was but I think it's quality is not good while the current of energy from the electricity was too strong that caused it to break. However, it's good that I brought with me a USB LED lighting from Japan and I can use it as an alternative now. I cannot replace the broken bulb yet as I don't have any replacement and the ceiling it too high. Also the gate of my outdoor toilet looks broken. The bricks look loose. I have to use it carefully because it's quite dangerous.
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This is a diary about how I spent my day in Monkey Bay
13th JuneI put an emphasis on the importance of environmental issue during my class. Nuclear energy is more powerful but also more dangerous. I explained to the students that in Japan, we used to utilize a nuclear source of energy. However, when it was damaged, it affected a lot of people.
One of the student's father's business brings uranium and other resources from the north to the south of Malawi. However, many students do not know that there are many resources in Malawi. I asked him to research it for us. Malawian may not be rich but Malawi is rich because of its abundant resources.
There is a national strike in progress in primary schools all over Malawi. Teachers protest because they don't get paid well/paid enough/a high enough salary enough salary. Tomorrow it is the national foundation day, that's why it's a holiday and we don't need to go to school. In my school, the graduation ceremony for High School will be this coming Friday, June 16th. Therefore, we won't be having classes again.
At home, the light bulb in my room broke suddenly last night suddenly got broken last night. I didn't know what the exact cause was but I think it's quality wasn't good/was poor is not good while the current of energy from the electricity was too strong and that caused it to break. However, it's good that I brought with me a USB LED lighting from Japan and I can use it instead as an alternative now. I cannot replace the broken bulb yet as I don't have any replacements and the ceiling it too high. Also the gate of my outdoor toilet looks broken. The bricks look loose. I have to use it carefully because it's quite dangerous.
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