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There is one person I am really keen on Topic-There is one person I am really keen on There are many celebrities that leave an impression on me, but I am really keen on this person. He is a artist called Cai Guo-Qiang, who is one of the most prominent contemporary artist in China. He is good at making gunpowder painting. It was during my spare time that I watch a documentary about him for the first time. He came from a fishing village in China and he was raised by his grandmother, so his family was not wealthy in his childhood. However, his grandmother strived to earn a living in order to let him receive an education and supported him in whatever he wanted to do. Hence, he end up succeeding in becoming a renowned artist. To show an appreciation of his grandmother, he gave her a present about a piece of art entitled " The ladder of sky", which is a quite high ladder of fire climbing to the sky, connecting heaven and earth. He said that it's the most difficult project and he had tried it for 20 years. That brightened my eyes when I saw it. I found it breathtaking and touching. I really adore him. Whatever lots of setbacks he experiences, he never give up keeping going on his design. That's why I am a big fan of him.

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There is one person I am really keen on

Topic-There is one person I am really keen on

There are many celebrities that leave an impression on me, but I am really keen on this person. He is an artist called Cai Guo-Qiang, who is one of the most prominent contemporary artists in China. He is good at making gunpowder paintings.
It was during my spare time that I watched a documentary about him for the first time. He came from a fishing village in China and he was raised by his grandmother, so his family was not wealthy in his childhood. However, his grandmother strivedstrove to earn a living in order to let him receive an education, and supported him in whatever he wanted to do. Hence, he end up succeedingsucceeded* in becoming a renowned artist.
To show an appreciation of for his grandmother, he gave her a present about a piece of art entitled " The ladder of sky", which is a quite high ladder of fire climbing to the sky, connecting heaven and earth. He said that it's it was the most difficult project and he had tried worked on it for 20 years. That brightened my eyes when I saw it. I found it breathtaking and touching.
I really adore him. Whatever lots of **setbacks he experiences, he never gives up keeping going on his design. That's why I am a big fan of him.

*you could also say "ended up succeeding", but "succeeded" sounds more natural

**you could also say "Despite the many setbacks..." if you want to emphasize that there are a lot of them.

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