Year million (1)
“Year million” is a documentary series that explores the AI “Artificial Intelligence” and its consequences on human life in the long term.
It begins when a family travelling by car has suffered a strong crash. There they are the father and the mother, blessed but not seriously, kneeling next the body of their fifteen years old daughter; she is lying inert and perhaps dead.
Immediately they appear a little troop of police; not real “human polices” but drones making all the necessary functions required in such situations.
One of the drones, with a spherical form, stands a foot over the head of the girl testing her through a weak ray of light.
After a few seconds, with an impersonal voice, the drone says to parents: “I’m very sorry. Your daughter is dead.”. “ You have only five minutes to decide if you want to reply her brain, before the information contained on it disappears”.
The father, astonished, can’t say anything, but the mother accepts immediately. So, the drone begins, again through ray of lights, its work, extracting and scanning the whole information contained in the brain of the girl. . .
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Year million (1)
“Year million” is a documentary series exploring AI or "Artificial Intelligence” and its long term consequences for human life.It begins with a family crashing their car. Father and mother are not seriously hurt and are kneeling next the body of their fifteen year old daughter, who is lying inert and perhaps dead.
Immediately appears a little troop of police; not real “human police” but drones doing all the necessary functions required in such situations.
One of the drones, of spherical form, hovers a foot over the head of the girl probing her through a weak ray of light.
After a few seconds, with an impersonal voice, the drone tells the parents: “I’m very sorry. Your daughter is dead. You have only five minutes to decide if you want to (reply?retain?) her brain, before the information contained on it disappears”.
The father, astonished, is speechless, but the mother accepts immediately. So the drone begins, again, through ray of lights, its work, extracting and scanning the whole information contained in the brain of the girl. . .
very well written!
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Year million (1)
“Year million” is a documentary series that exploresIt begins when a family travelling by car is involved in a serious crash. There they are, the father and the mother, injured but not seriously, kneeling next to the body of their fifteen year old daughter; she is lying motionless and perhaps dead. Inert - lo usual es no usar esta palabra para describer una persona. Lo usual es usarla para quimicos o a lo mejor ingredients en una receta cuyo trabajo es que no se dehace, etc. Con un sentido de humor, se puede aplicar a una personalidad.
Immediately appeared some policemen / immediately the police appeared; not real "police" but drones doing all the necessary documentation required in such situations.
Immediately appeared some policemen: lo usual en ingles es poner el sujeto antes del verbo, pero de ve en cuando, podemos decirlo en estilo espangol.
One of the drones, with a spherical form, stands a foot over the head of the girl testing her through a weak ray of light.
After a few seconds, with an impersonal voice, the drone says to parents: “I’m very sorry. Your daughter is dead.” You have only five minutes to decide if you want to reply ??? to her brain, before the information contained in it disappears”.
The father, astonished, can’t say anything, but the mother accepts immediately. So, the drone begins, again through a ray of light, its work, extracting and scanning the whole information contained in the brain of the girl. . .
Es cierto que hice corecciones pero por lo general, este texto suena mas nativo que los antes.
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