How should I write an invitation letter?
This is an invitation letter that I wrote. Is it suitable?
Dear Jane:
I will hold a dinner party at my house on 24th this month to celebrate my birthday. As you are a close friend of me , I would very like you to participate in this celebration and share my joy. Now I am writing to tell you about the details.
The party will start at 6 o'clock in the evening, with clown's performance. This will be followed by a dinner party. At around 9, I will hold a small dance soiree. Many old friends of us will be there.
If you do not have any prior appointment on 24th, I look forward to the pleasure of your coming.
Your sincerely
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Could you help me to correct it ? I would be very grateful.
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How should I write an invitation letter?
This is an invitation letter that I wrote. Is it suitable?Dear Jane:
I will hold a dinner party at my house on the 24th of this month to celebrate my birthday. As you are a close friend of mine , I would very much like you to participate in this celebration and share my joy. Now I am writing to tell you about the details.
The party will start at 6 o'clock in the evening, with clown's performance. This will be followed by a dinner party. At around 9, I will hold a small dance soiree. Many old friends of ours will be there.
If you do not have any prior appointments on the 24th, I look forward to the pleasure of seeing you.
Your sincerely
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Could you help me to correct it ? I would be very grateful.
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Nice job. I must stress that even though English is my native language I'm by no means the best at grammar haha, but I hope this helps you a little bit. :)
Best
Katie
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