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Time of The Year
Everybody has their favourite season of the year. Some people like a summer, because there is good and warm weather. Everybody goes to swimming and to camping. Some people like likes a winter. There is so much snow everywhere. Everywhere is much snow Kids play with snowballs and Christmas is celebrated during winter. Some people like spring. It is a time when flowers are blooming and leaves are growing. flowers. Beginning grow leaves. And somebody likes a oten. Finally, some people like autumn. A forest will become golden (as the leaves change their colours). Everything will become so beautiful.But However, I like every season of the year, as they each have something interesting. all time of the years. They have each something interesting. All these cheer up my life. make my life a cheerful.
Hi Boris,
Thank you for sharing about the four seasons. I live in a tropical country so I do not experience four seasons. We have monsoon winds though, and they bring moisture-laden winds and frequent rainfall.
Just a suggestion for your writing:
"Somebody" means one person whose identity we are unsure of. Example: Somebody broke into the bank and stole all the money last night! (You know one person stole the money, and you do not know the identity.) If you write "somebody likes winter", it means only one person likes winter and you do not know who he or she is.
Therefore, I changed your "somebody" to "some people".
Hope this helps.
Cheers,
Lance
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