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Making another journey! After my graduation day everything about the future really confusing me because everything in my mind becomes more blurry. May be it's because I have so many dreams to make them happen but still I have no idea how to work them out. I want to earn much money, go studying abroad, travel around the most beautiful places to visit, stay with all my loves (include: families and friends),... It seem impossible to hold them all by. Simple, If I choose to go studying abroad, it meants I couldn't stay with my families and friends, also couldn't earn many that much compared to others who work as professionals. Some people say that I'm too greedy, some people say that I'm too ambitious, but for me it shows my fire burning inside me, the energetic-young girl. I just need a little bit support from my inner-circle persons who know and love me the best.

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Making another journey!

After my graduation day everything about the future really confuses me because everything in my mind becomes more blurry. Maybe it's because I have so many dreams to make happen, but still, I have no idea how to work them out. I want to earn a lot of money,  study abroad, travel and visit around the most beautiful places, stay with all my loves (include: families and friends),... It seems impossible to accomplish. Simply, If I choose to go study abroad, it meants means I couldn't stay with my family and friends, also I couldn't earn as much money compared to other people who are professionals. that much compared to others who work as professionals. Some people say that I'm too greedy, some people say that I'm too ambitious, but for me it shows the my fire burning inside me and the energetic-young girl. I just need a little bit of support from the people in my inner-circle persons who know and love me the best.
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I corrected this a bit for you! Very good job!!

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