First essay:Should universities accept equal numbers of male and female students in every subject?
Now days, people pay more attention to the sexual equality which can be regarded as a social improvement in history. In this case, a part of people bring out the idea that there should be equal numbers of male and female students in each subject in the colleges.
Actually, it is reasonable and understandable. Take myself as an example, my major is language and literature, the percentage of male and female is 6/12, which is extremely unequal. It can be a trouble since we can not have a more complete communication environment in our study. other boys will not get access to learn knowledge about the marvelous culture as well. Truth be told, girls can be talent with arts and vice versa. This suggestion can guarantee the balance of male and female in different subjects.
Whereas, my individual opinion is that this measure can be well-intentioned. Firstly, a student's major should be a subject he loves and good at, the number of different gender should be decided according to the true demanding. Then, more students might lose the opportunities of their interests while others can be forced to involve the majors they are not interested in because of the fixed percentage. What is more important is that the justice is not reflected by the official rules but the public attitude towards to bisexual relationship in daily life. Such as whether everyone can obtain the equal rights thought their abilities and so forth.
In a word, it should be raised since people lay more importance on sexual equality, we need to come up with more practical solutions.
It is my first essay, please help me to modify it, thank you very much!
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