Just tried to write story for children.
Lhakpa always goes to look after their goats and sheep, in the jungle, over the hills and around the fields.
He always shares his meals with one kid; he loves the most, the special one.
The kid follows him, in the jungles, over the hills and around the fields.
One spring Friday in the midst of jungle, Lhakpa called the kid. Come here! Let’s have a lunch together. The kid joined happily and had a lunch singing the sweetest song me! me! me!
But this time he thanked him with human voice. Lhakpa was shocked and said. Hello! How you did it. The kid replied. I don’t know how. But I am happy with it.
The kid said “why you love me?”
Lhakpa replied “because, you have god gifted garland and stunning spots. And coincidently we both were born on the same day The Friday.
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Lhakpa always goes to look after the goats and sheep, in the jungle, over the hills, and around the fields. He always shares his meals with one kid - the one he loves the most, the special one. The kid follows him through the jungles, over the hills, and around the fields. One spring Friday in the midst of jungle, Lhakpa called the kid. "Come here! Let’s have lunch together." The kid joined happily and had lunch singing the sweetest song, "Me! Me! Me!" But this time the kid thanked him with a human voice. Lhakpa was shocked and said, "Hello! ("Wow" might be better than "hello") How were you able to speak?" The kid replied, "I don’t know how, but I am happy about it." The kid asked, "Why do you love me?” Lhakpa replied, “Because, you have a god-gifted garland and stunning spots. And coincidently we both were born on the same day - Friday."
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