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taihu lake, serious pollution During the chinese traditional holiday-dragon boat festival, I traveled to taihu lake- the third largest lake in china. The weather is nice, the sky is blue ,but the water of lake is green and smelly. The water in taihu lake is serously polluted several years ago due to rapid industrial expansion , although Chinese government had spent much money against the water pollution, the water of taihu lake is still smelly, Water eutrophication is obvious. In china ,the environmental pollution is very serious, and the health of people lived around taihu lake is threated by poor water quality, which can cause many sorts of cancer. I think Chinese government should never sacrifice the health of people to increase rapidly economy and let few people to become very rich.

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Taihu lake, serious pollution

During the Chinese traditional holiday, the Dragon Boat Festival, I traveled to Lake Taihu - the third largest lake in China. The weather was nice, the sky was blue, but the water in the lake was green and smelly. The water in Lake Taihu was serously polluted several years ago due to rapid industrial expansion. Although the Chinese government has spent a lot of money on water pollution, the water of Lake Taihu lake is still smelly, Water eutrophication is obvious.
In China, environmental pollution is very serious, and the health of people who live around Lake Taihu is threatened by poor water quality, which can cause many sorts of cancer. I think the Chinese government should never sacrifice the health of people to rapidly  increase  the economy and let a few people become very rich.


Hello Wang,

I fully agree with your point of view but if it is any consolation it is not just Lake Taihu which has suffered in this way.

Remember to use capital letters at the beginning of all proper names.

Best wishes


Bob

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