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Please correct! I am happy You know why? Because i don't expect anything from anyone Wait always hurts Problems are not eternal There are always a solution The only thing that is not solved is death Life is short, therefore LOVE IT and be happy. Before talk, LISTEN Before write, THINK Before hurt, FEEL Before giving up, TRY Before die, LIVE!

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Please correct!

I am happy
You know why?
Because i I don't expect anything from anyone
Waiting always hurts
Problems are not eternal (or: problems are only temporary / problems don't last forever)
There are is always a solution
The only thing that is not solved is death (better: "...that cannot be solved")
Life is short, therefore so LOVE IT and be happy. Before you talk, LISTEN
Before you write something, THINK
Before you hurt someone, FEEL
Before giving up, TRY
Before you die, LIVE!

Very inspirational :) I do agree with you that too often people tend to succumb to negative emotions without considering an alternative. 

Language notes:

(1)  Before + subject + verb   OR   Before + V_ing

Before you write - OK

Before writing - OK

Before write = impossible ;)

(2) "Therefore" - the meaning was right, but "therefore" is a linking word, and in your sentence you needed a conjunction. See the difference:

"Life is short, so you should try to be happy."

"Life is short. Therefore, you should try to be happy" OR "Life is short; therefore, you should try to be happy."

Some more information can be found here: https://guinlist.wordpress.com/2012/11/26/40-conjunctions-versus-connectors/ 



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Please correct!

I am happy
You know why?
Because i don't expect anything from anyone
Waiting always hurts
Problems are not eternal
There are   is always a solution
The only unsolvable thing that is not solved is death
Life is short, therefore LOVE IT and be happy. Before you talk, LISTEN
Before you  write, THINK
Before you  hurt, FEEL
Before you giving  give up, TRY
Before you  die, LIVE!



Great ! Keep writing! :))

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