Essay to correct. Advantages and disadvantages of becoming a celebrity
Nowadays benefits of becoming a famous person are a topic very dicussed. Everybody knows that when you become a celebrity your life changes but, how does it do?
On the one hand, if you are a celebrity probably you earn very much money so some of your dreams will became true, for example having a beautiful house, travelling around the world... Moreover it's beutiful knowing that a lot of people love and admire you.
On the other hand, celebrities have a lot of troubles. For example they miss being alone in the street, without cameras, without paparazzis. What's more they usually don't know when somebody loves them or loves their lifes, their fame.
As far as I'm concerned I'm happy having a simple life, I know that my family and friends love me and they are enough so I wouldn't like to be famous.
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Essay to correct. Advantages and disadvantages of becoming a celebrity
Nowadays, the benefits of becoming a famous person is a widely discussed topic . Everybody knows that when you become a celebrity your life changes but (if you use a connective then you don't need to use a comma) how does it do?On the one hand, if you are a celebrity you probably earn very much a lot of money so some of your dreams will became come true. For example having a beautiful house, travelling around the world... Moreover it's beautiful knowing that lots of people love and admire you.
On the other hand, celebrities have a lot of troubles. For example they miss being alone in the street, without cameras, without paparazzi. What's more they usually don't know when somebody loves them or just loves their lives, their fame.
As far as I'm concerned I'm happy having a simple life, I know that my family and friends love me and they are enough so I wouldn't like to be famous.
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