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Tehran(the capital of Iran) lifestyle The driving and traffic: actually Tehran is one the biggest city of Iran and it is a very crowded city. the traffic is terrible specially in the evening(s) between 5 oclock and 7 oclock. If u want go somewhere in the afternoon u must move about 1 hours sooner to arrive in time (traffic takes a lot of time). and sometimes traffic makes me crazy and I disobey the laws to getaway of traffic.I think one the worse thing about people in Tehran is they are usually on the phone when they are driving and I think its very dangerous and its usually make accident. In south of Tehran traffic is terrible so I think subway and buses are the best way of transportation(moving from one place to another place) but in the north of Tehran traffic isnt as terrible as south so taxis can use for faster traveling. The people If I want to talk about hospitably I can say bravely Iranian people are known as hospitable people. but about other thing I cant say exact thing. people migrate to Tehran from different part of Iran nowadays because of higher level of accommodation and life style. so we have different people with different belief culture and religious. I mean there is something different between them and something common. It would be great if some one help me to revise my essay

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Life in Tehran, the capital city of Iran.

Driving and traffic:

Tehran is actually one of the biggest cities in Iran and it is a very crowded city. The traffic is terrible, especially in the evenings between 5 o' clock and 7 o' clock. If you want to go somewhere in the afternoon, you must leave about an hour sooner to arrive in time (traffic takes a lot of time).

Sometimes traffic makes me crazy and I disobey the laws to get away from the traffic. I think the worst thing about people in Tehran, is that they are usually on the phone when they are driving, which is very dangerous and usually causes accidents.

In the South of Tehran, traffic is terrible, so I think using the subway and buses are the best ways of transportation, (moving from one place to another place) but in the North of Tehran, traffic isn't as terrible as the South, so taxis can be used for faster traveling.

The people
If I want to talk about hospitality, I can say bravely that Iranian people are known as hospitable people. However, about other things, I can't be sure. Nowadays, people migrate to Tehran from different parts of Iran because of the higher standard of living and the  lifestyle. So, we have different people with different beliefs, cultures and religions. I mean, there are similarities and differences between the people of Tehran.


It would be great if someone would help me revise my essay.

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Tehran(the capital of Iran) lifestyle> The lifestyle in Tehran, the capital of Iran.

The driving and traffic:> The driving and traffic conditions in Tehran.
actually Tehran is one the biggest city in of Iran, and it is a very crowded city. The traffic here is terrible, especially in the evening, (s) between 5 o'clock and 7 o'clock. If you want go somewhere in the afternoon, you must leave move about an hour earlier so 1 hours sooner to arrive at the place on/in time.       (traffic takes a lot of time)> This is not necessary. The fact is obvious from what you said earlier.
and Sometimes, the traffic here makes me crazy, and I would disregard disobey the laws in order to get out of the congestion.to getaway of traffic.I think one of the worse thing about the people in Tehran is that they are usually on the phone when they are driving, and I think it's very dangerous to do that, because this irresponsible behaviour may result in an accident .and its usually make accident.
In south of Tehran, the traffic is even worst,  terrible so I think using the subway and buses are the best ways to travel from place to place. of transportation(moving from one place to another place) However, in the north of Tehran, where the  traffic isn't as terrible as in the south, so taxis can be a faster form of public transportation.  use for faster traveling.

The people of Tehran.
If you  I want to talk about hospitality,  hospitably, I can say bravely say that Iranian people are well known for it/ (their hospitality) .  as hospitable people. but However, with regard to other things, about other thing I can't say the same about them. exact thing. A lot of people are migrating  to Tehran from different parts of Iran nowadays, because Tehran has better housing opportunities and a vibrant lifestyle  .of higher level of accommodation and life style. so Therefore, we have different people of with different beliefs cultures and religions living in this city.  I mean there is something different between them and something common.???


It would be great if some one could help me (to) revise my essay.

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