Internet and its application

according to essay men usually send emails for work but women send more personal emails.> According to a study done on this subject, men tend to use the email service on the Internet primarily for work, whereas/while women use it to send mails of a more social nature.

In other hand women prefer to buy things on shopping websites like toys furniture and food material but men prefer buy things from auction sites > On top of that/ Besides this, women prefer to buy things from online shopping websites, such as toys, furniture and foodstuffs, and men are more likely to buy only from auction sites.

. men usually use internet for fun. > Men also like to use the Internet for 'fun' .

they usually play video games.> They use it to pay video games.

they visit sport websites and get information about the match scores.> They also like to visit sport websites to find out about the latest match results.

but women prefer to get information about healthy food and they usually visit websites witch give them advice like how to lose weight or how can they be a good parents. > On the other hand, women prefer to use the Internet to get more information about health matters or to seek advice on how to lose weight or how to become better parents.

men usually use internet to pay their bills and women usually use online mapping more than men specially when they go somewhere new.
> Men like to use the Internet to pay their bills more than women, and women use online navigational tools more than men, especially when they are going to a place that they are not familiar with.
and about my self I can say: > As for myself, I can tell you this much.

I usually spend about 5 to 6 hours on the Internet daily/a day. I usually use the Internet to practice and enhance my language skills for about 2 hours everyday.

It depends though, for sometimes I would just use it  to play video games with my friend,  or I   and sometimes I prefer to might spend the time my times on social medias, such as  Instagram or Telegram. I would chat with my friends and would sometime upload some new photos or new videos that which I thought was  it funny.

but one my favorite things is download new song tracks.> However, one of the favourite pastime is still downloading new song tracks from the Internet.

I usually write a part of song lyrics when I hear it in taxi or at party which I like it. and after that I look for it in the internet.

> I would write down part of the lyrics of a song that I liked, whether I heard it for the first time while I was in a taxi or in a party, and look it up in the Internet.

I would appreciate it if I could ask a native language speaker could help me (to) revise my essay.

*I tried to make it sounds as natural as I can, for your problem is mainly in the constructions .

* If you have been doing a thing regularly or always in the past ( until now ), then you use "would"

Before I entered someone's house, I would (usually) take off my shoes first.