The hills In the countryside.
I drove my car in the countryside.
There were some hills and I went up and down them.
The road of the hill was narrow and a steep slope.
So I had to dieve carefully to pass some coming cars.
Sometimes I gave my way to them when the car was coming from below.
But there were no space to stop the car, so we narrowly passed each other on the road of the hill.
In Europe, there is no border inspection on the highway. So we can drive to other European countries
across the border.
Is this sentence correct?
The plan you said is much better than the one which I said earlier.
(In this case, " better than mine " is also OK?)
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The hills In the countryside.
I drove my car in the countryside. There were some hills and I went up and down them. The hill roads were narrow and steep, so I had to drive carefully to pass oncoming cars. Sometimes I gave way to them when the car was coming from below.But there was no space to stop the car, so we had to pass each other closely/carefully on the hill road .
In Europe, there are no border checks on the highway. So we can drive across the border to other European countries
.
Is this sentence correct?
The plan you suggested/came up with is much better than mine.
(In this case, " better than mine " is also OK?)
Hello Reiko,
Just a few small corrections to the text but I could understand everything.
In English we usually 'come up with' a plan.
Hope this helps
Bob
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The hills In the countryside.
I drove my car in the countryside.There were some hills and I went up and down them.
The road up of the hill [not technically wrong but often it doesn't read quite right if you use the possessive to describe one inanimate object as belonging to another. Put in another preposition (like up) and you'll be fine] was narrow and a steep slope. [This is also technically fine, but sounds more natural if you just use the word "steep"]
So I had to dieve drive carefully to pass some oncoming cars.
Sometimes I gave my way to them when the car was coming from below uphill ['From below' sounds a little like your car was on top of them! 'Uphill' works better, especially when describing driving]
But there were was no space to stop the car, so we narrowly passed each other on the road of the hill hill road. [Same as above, although you could just use 'road' or stop after the word 'other' and it would sound fine. Sometimes less is better :) ]
In Europe, there is no border inspection on the highway. So we can drive to other European countries
across the border.
Is this sentence correct?
The plan you said is much better than the one which I said earlier.
(In this case, " better than mine " is also OK?)
[Yes, this sentence does work, but it is a bit wordy - you don't need the word 'which' and 'better than mine' would improve it]
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So much of this is so good! Honestly, apart from a couple of words, most of my corrections are cosmetic.
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