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Taking part in Model United Nations Last year, I took part in a meeting of Model United Nations for the first time. The nameplate of the country Zaire was assigned to me.So I should speak for Zaire at the meeting.Before that, I found some information about Zaire on the Internet.At the meeting,however,they opened the topics that I didn't found information about.And there were many senior high school students.And just a few junior high school students like me.I was too nervous and shy to speak,even though the first half was in Chinese.My schoolmates were braver than me.They spoke many times. In the second half, every country delegate's language should change into English.So there were fewer people speaking.I finally decided to speak.I put my hand up.And the chair added me into the speaking list.However, it was so late that I was the last one to speak.I mainly talked about general situation and asked the developed countries for help.when the time given was over, I had not finished my words but I had to stop. Though I spoke little in the meeting, I still felt excited.I would continue studying hard to improve my English. Thanks for watching.

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Taking part in Model United Nations

Last year, I took part in a meeting of Model United Nations for the first time.
The nameplate of the country Zaire was assigned to me.So I should speak for Zaire at the meeting.Before that, I found some information about Zaire on the Internet.At the meeting,however,they opened the topics that I didn't hadn't found information about.And there were many senior high school students.And just a few junior high school students like me.I was too nervous and shy to speak,even though the first half was in Chinese.My schoolmates were braver than me.They spoke many times.
In the second half, every each country delegate's language should change into English.So there were fewer people speaking.I finally decided to speak.I put my hand up.And the chair added me into the speaking list.However, it was so late that I was the last one to speak.I mainly talked about general situation and asked the developed countries for help.when the time given was over, I had not finished my words speaking but I had to stop.
Though I spoke little in the meeting, I still felt excited.I would will continue studying hard to improve my English.


This is really good. The words I've crossed out and changed are ways to make the language flow more like a native speaker, which is something you'll pick over time. This was a very well written piece of English.

Speaking in front of a large group of people must have been very difficult, especially in a foreign language. Well done!

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