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Can you help me check the sentence, please! (3) My best friend whose name is Brown. I have known her for 14 or 15 years. I met her when we studied at elementally school and we studied same school as me in high school. When we finished high school we studied different university. I studied in Bangkok but she studied in Chonburi near the sea. We didn't meet infrequent. We can meet just once time in twice months. In fact, Sometime I didn't meet long times. Fortunately, It didn't matter for us because I always kept in thought in Line application and Facebook Messenger. Actually, It was easy and Internet in my country was unlimited. Naturally, When we had free time we always went to go ate, watched movie and go shopping. It was happy time we talked a lot of things to saw and did. Fortunately, Now we are studying in Shafston Collage at Australia. She just had passed level up test last week. Of course, We live in Shafston Mansion together. Unfortunately, She can't cook anythings. Her fingers were always cut by knife, so I always cook and her always clean the room. Anyway we get very good experience in Australia. We really like here. However, If we have chance we will extend to study in here. I would like to practice my writing English skill. Thank you for help me check. (^_^)

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My best friend's name is Brown. I have known her for 14 or 15 years. I met her when we studied at elementary school and she studied at same school as me in high school. After we graduated from high school, we studied in different universities. I studied in Bangkok while she studied in Chonburi near the sea. We rarely meet one another . We only met once time in every two months.  Fortunately, we still managed to keep in touch the Line application and Facebook Messenger. (Actually, It was easy and Internet in my country was unlimited. )don't understand what you trying to say here. When we have free time, we always go out for lunch/dinner, watch movie and go shopping. It was pleasant time for both of us as we talked about a lot of things that we saw and did. Currently, we are studying at Shafston Collage in Australia. She had just passed her  level up test last week. We live in Shafston Mansion together. However, she can't cook.When she cook, she accidentally cut her fingers with the knife, so I always cook for her and clean the house. All in all, we have a very good experience here in Australia. We really like it here. Given the chance, we hope to extend our study period here.



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