My chickens
There are four chickens in my family. They are about eight months old. They came to my family when they were baby-chickens eight months ago. I bought two of them in a market. My mother bought the other two. They are hens. They began to lay eggs two months ago and they lay eggs everyday now. They are cute and all of us like them. They have a happy life in my family.
The picture below was taken 4 months ago , when they were still very young.
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My chickens
There are four chickens in my family. They are about eight months old and they came to my family when they were chicks eight months ago. I bought two of them in a market and my mother bought the other two. They are hens and they began to lay eggs two months ago, they lay eggs everyday now. They are cute and all of us like them. They have a happy life in my family.The picture below was taken 4 months ago , when they were still very young.
Hello Huaruxiu,
Nice writing with one correction and I joined some sentences together to make them sound more natural. Chickens are good pets, they are quite relaxing to watch when they are scratching around in the garden.
Best wishes
Bob
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