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My Memorable Shopping Experience My most memorable shopping experience was last month. I really love to enjoy tea time. That day I noticed to run out of my favorite black tea, so I headed to the mall to buy one. The tea I had in mind was too expensive. I hesitated to buy what I wanted for a long time. A few minutes later, I put it back in its place. Instead, I picked other teas. I was very disappointed. Then, I went to the cash register to pay for the rest of them. It was then I noticed the sale section. The section sells the products closed to the expiration date and whose package is damaged. There was the tea I've wanted. As a result, I was able to buy it at a bargain sale. I was surprised and delighted. This was very memorable because I didn't have a lot of money at the time. I felt so grateful that I was able to save so much money and have what I'm crazy for. That's why this shopping experience was special to me.

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My Memorable Shopping Experience

My most memorable shopping experience was from last month. I really love to enjoy tea time. (more natural: "I really love drinking tea") That day I noticed to run that I ran out of my favorite black tea, so I headed to the mall to buy one more.

The tea I had in mind was too expensive. I hesitated to buy what I wanted for a long time. A few minutes later, I put it back in its place. Instead, I picked other teas. I was very disappointed. Then, I went to the cash register to pay for the rest of them. It was then I noticed the sale section. The section sells the products closed close to the expiration date and whose package is damaged. There was the tea I've wanted. As a result, I was able to buy it at a bargain sale. I was surprised and delighted.

This was very memorable because I didn't have a lot of money at the time. I felt so grateful that I was able to save so much money and have what I'm crazy for. That's why this shopping experience was special to me.


Nice journal entry Sunny, your English is very good! Now you have to work on saying things a little more naturally. If you're interested in getting help with that, feel free to set up a trial with me :)

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