Describing a photo
his photo was made in the cinema. We can see 2 rows of people sitting in the darkness. There is a big lighter behind them. In the centre of the photo there is a girl looking in her mobile phone. She looks as if she has seen a bad news. I think she feels devastating and isn’t interested in the movie at all. I suppose she is thinking what to answer on her message. To her right we can see a man eating a pop-corn. I suppose both of them are know each other. He tries to read the message on the girl’s mobile phone but it is difficult to do this in the darkness. I assume he doesn’t like the message too but he hasn’t realized the dismay of the message yet. The man on the right side of the picture looks on the phone with big interest, I think he is neutral.
In the background we see people who are watching the film and really enjoy it. They haven’t got any problems as people on the foreground.
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Describing a photo
His photo was taken in the cinema. We can see 2 rows of people sitting in the darkness. There is a bright light behind them. In the centre of the photo there is a girl looking at her mobile phone. She looks as if she has seen some bad news. I think she feels devastated and isn’t interested in the movie at all. I suppose she is thinking how to answer her message. To her right we can see a man eating pop-corn. I imagine both of them know each other. He tries to read the message on the girl’s mobile phone but it is difficult to do this in the darkness. I assume he doesn’t like the message too but he hasn’t realised the sadness of the message yet. The man on the right side of the picture looks at the phone with great interest, I think he is neutral.In the background we see people who are watching the film and really enjoying it. They don't seem to have the same problems as the people in the foreground.
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Describing a photo
His photo was made in the cinema. We can see 2 rows of people sitting in the darkness. There is a big light behind them. In the center of the photo there is a girl looking at her mobile phone. She looks as if she has seen bad news. I think she feels devastated and isn’t interested in the movie at all. I suppose she is thinking about what to answer on her message. To her right we can see a man eating popcorn. I suppose both of them know each other. He tries to read the message on the girl’s mobile phone but it is difficult to do this in the darkness. I assume he doesn’t like the message too but he hasn’t realized the dismay of the message yet. The man on the right side of the picture looks at the phone with a lot of interest. I think he is neutral.In the background we see people who are watching the film and really enjoy it. They haven’t got any problems like the people on the foreground.
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Describing a photo
his photo was made in the cinema. We can see 2 rows of people sitting in the darkness. There is a big lighter behind them. In the centre of the photo there is a girl looking in her mobile phone.> The photo was taken in a cinema. You can see in the photo that there are 2 rows of people sitting in the dark in front of a slightly brighter background, with a girl looking at her mobile phone in the centre of the picture.
She looks as if she has seen a bad news.>She looked as if she had just heard a piece of bad news.
I think she feels devastating and isn’t interested in the movie at all.> I think that she must be devastated by it, for she did not show any interest in the movie.
I suppose she is thinking what to answer on her message. > I guess she must be thinking as to how she should reply to that message.
To her right we can see a man eating a pop-corn.< And there was this man eating popcorns to her right.
I suppose both of them are know each other.> They might know one another, but I am not sure about that.
He tries to read the message on the girl’s mobile phone but it is difficult to do this in the darkness.> He tried to steal a look at the message on her mobile phone, but it was difficult for him to do so in the dark.
I assume he doesn’t like the message too but he hasn’t realized the dismay of the message yet.> I assumed he would not like whatever he read -- but he had yet to realize the gravity of the message.
The man on the right side of the picture looks on the phone with big interest, I think he is neutral.>As it really was, the man on her right in the picture was just looking at her phone out of curiosity, and they did not know one another.
In the background we see people who are watching the film and really enjoy it. They haven’t got any problems as people on the foreground.> So the truth was that the people at the back were just enjoying themselves as much as those who were sitting in front.
I find it to understand what you want to say. Therefore, I changed your sentences as I go along.
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