Could you help me check my email, please? Dear Mr. David, I am writing to explain about why I and Ms.Tien did not write the name of Ms. Anh in the assignment #3 report. Firstly, we have a group on F

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Could you help me check my email, please? Dear Mr. David, I am writing to explain about why I and Ms.Tien did not write the name of Ms. Anh in the assignment #3 report. Firstly, we have a group on Facebook to discuss about the assignment 3, when I and Tien discuss about the questionnaire and how to run regression, Ms. Anh did not write any comments, so only I and Tien do these things. Secondly, Ms. Anh did not take her responsibility. Her writing in the report is a mess, she put the citation in the end of each sentences in her parts. When we ask her to repair her work, she did not reply or do anything, although I said that if she does not repair, I will say to teacher. However, nothing change, so I and Tien must to do again her work. Therefore, we decided to not write her name in the report because we feel that it is unfair with us. Thanks for your consideration! Best regards,

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Could you help me check my email, please?

Dear Mr. David,

I am writing to explain about why I and Ms.Tien * did not write the name of Ms. Anh** in the third assignment #3 report.

Firstly, we have a group on Facebook to discuss about the third assignment 3, when I and Tien discuss about the questionnaire and how to run regression, Ms. Anh did not write any comments, so only I and Tien did these things.

Secondly, Ms. Anh did not carry out take her responsibility. Her written section of the report was done carelesslywriting in the report is a mess, as she put the citation at the end of each sentence in her sections. When we asked her to edit repair her work, she neither replied nor did anything.*** did not reply or do anything, Although I had warned her that I would inform the teacher if she did not do anything, nothing changed. I said that if she does not repair, I will say to teacher. However, nothing change, so I and Tien Therefore, Ms, Tien and I had to edit for her. must to do again her work.

Therefore, we decided to not not to write her name in the report because we feel that it is unfair to us.

Thank you for your consideration!

Best regards,

NAME

Hi there,

Just a few suggestions for you:

* In English, we extend our courtesy to others by introducing others' names before introducing ours.

(Example: Judy and I (correct) / I and Judy (wrong)

** We use apostrophe ('s) to indicate a possession of a person. (Example: Judy's purse) To indicate a part of an object, we say "X of Y" (Example: The cover (X) of the book (Y) is torn.) It is unnatural to write "the purse of Judy" or "the name of Ms. Anh".

*** We use "neither"....... "nor" to describe double negatives. She did not reply (negative) and she did not do anything (negative again).

Hope this helps.
Cheers,
Lance

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