The weather (Please help me to correct it, tks)
It was sunny this morning, the sun shine(or the sun shined? or sunshine was shine?) . But it rained heavily in the afternoon. Whenever I had to go out. I couldn't hold my umbrella, so all my clothes are wet. I hope rain has stoped now.
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The weather (Please help me to correct it, tks)
It was sunny this morning, the sun shine(or the sun shined? or sunshine was shine?)* . But it rained heavily in the afternoon. Whenever I had to go out, I couldn't hold my umbrella, so all my clothes are wet. I hope rain has stopped now.* Typically this would be "The sun was shining."
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The weather (Please help me to correct it, tks)
It was sunny this morning, the sun shine(or the sun shined? or sunshine was shine?) . But it rained heavily in the afternoon. Whenever I had to go out. I couldn't hold my umbrella, so all my clothes are wet. I hope rain has stoped now.This is good, I wrote my version below.
The sun was shining this morning, but it rained heavily this afternoon. Nonetheless, I had to go out. I couldn't hold my umbrella so all of my clothes got wet. I hope the rain has stopped now.
It is a little repetitive to say it was sunny and the sun was shine in the same sentence.
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