My CV
Dear sir/Madam
I recently saw your advertisment for a lifeguard assistant and I would like to apply. I eclose my CV. I am 25 years old and I live in Kutaisi. I have a good working experience which I help me to work very hard, because I am very willing.
First of all I am an active person in various activites. I am swimmer and I can help people and work with them.
Secondly, the job would give me valueble work experience during the summer holiday. please see my enclosed resume for more details.
Finally I will be available to start work in the middle of July, I hope you will consider my application. Ican be contacted by phone or email for an iterview. I look forward to hearing from you in the near future.
Your Sincerely
Name Surname
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My CV
Dear sir/Madam -->This isn't wrong but it's unusualI recently saw your advertisment for a lifeguard assistant and I would like to apply. Good! I eclose again, not wrong but not something commonly said my CV. I am 25 years old and I live in Kutaisi. I have a remove this good working experience which I help me replace with "helps me" to work very hard; because I am very willing.
First of all, I am an active person in various activites. I am swimmer and I can help people and work with them.
Secondly, the job would give me valueble work experience during the summer holiday. Please see my enclosed resume for more details.
Finally, I will be available to start work in the middle of July, I hope you will consider my application. I can be contacted by phone or email for an iterview. I look forward to hearing from you in the near future. Not wrong but a bit awkward.
Your Sincerely
Name Surname
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